Ideas for Opening 2 mins

First two minutes

Camera pans around to look through a half closed door of a girl of about 17 sleeping in a child’s room (pink and fluffy). Girl in the bed is having bad dream, tossing and turning. We then cross cut to a P.O.V shot of the girl running though a forest heavy breathing. We will do this several times each time using a different camera angle. Trying to give the audience the sense that the girl is having a dream of something that happened to her. This will account for the majority of the two minutes. The last 30 seconds we will have the girl burst up from the bed; we will have a close up of her face to show that she’s very scared then cut to her talking to her parents asking her about it asking what she sees in the dream what did he do to her etc.  

Maybe we shouldn't show the girl in bed? Maybe it would make a tenser start if we don;t know whether it is dream or reality?